Dialogue
Here’s my dialogue. My brother as my dad and me as my mom. Somehow, 70% of the whatever we said are true to what my parents would say if they were to have an argument about any one of them coming home late.
When I combined both dialogues that I wrote during tutorial I felt that it was much easier to elaborate or rather lengthen my dialogue (the one where my parents have an argument). Anyway, having the first dialogue helped me a lot because my parents do not really have a big argument when either one of them comes home late. They always inform each other, so it was difficult to make this assignment interesting and not mundane.
Anyway, here’s my script:
Husband: As oh As, I am home.
Wife: Hmmm, okay. Woah, you came home late today.
Husband: Abang had coffee with my friends. I guess we were too engrossed talking until we did not realise the time.
Wife: Then, what’s your hand phone for? For fun is it?
‘’;
Husband: Why are you grumbling? Abang don’t often come home late okay. So you should chill. It’s late already.
Wife: Chill you say? You know what time it is already? Anyway, I am your wife. Thus, I should know where you were and who you were with.
Husband: Oh come on, you trust me don’t you. Let’s tuck in, okay.
Wife: Don’t try to change subject lah.
Husband: As, can you stop nagging. I am tired of hearing this. Forget it, I won’t talk to you about this.
Wife: Fine, you don’t have to pick me up from work tomorrow. I better not see your car!
Husband: Aiyah, don’t be so sensitive. Come on now.
Wife: If I see your car tomorrow, I will run away.
*abang – dear
December 14, 2007 at 12:14 am
OMGFWD.
is that u zid? don’t lie ok…the woman’s voice dont sound like u lah
December 14, 2007 at 12:15 am
eh i mean natra…u sound so diff la
December 14, 2007 at 8:34 am
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. it’s me. it really is fiqa. ((:
January 2, 2008 at 11:34 am
Good dialogue – very believeable and has a good sense of tension between the two characters.
January 2, 2008 at 9:02 pm
Thanks mr leslie (: